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Unwelcome Guests (Arthritis, Bursitis, Tendonitis, Gout) Miracle Man 10-11-2023 The “rItis” boys came to visit, and their welcome overstayed. My futile efforts to evict them, they always downplayed. Arth, Burs, and Tendon, that very unpleasant three. Were always reluctant to leave, before the ravaging of me. For pain I gave each points, on occasion they brought a shout. They all attacked my joints, but none compared to Gout.

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Date: 10/13/2023 6:52:00 AM
A friend is just getting over gout. Oof! But the three amigos you mention are bad visitors as well. Nice way to highlight these menaces
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