Unwanted Thoughts

Bursts of dusting snow
fall from the branches.
It looks like sugar,
sifting through the air.
Suddenly, unwanted thoughts
leave me in my stance,
and I simply don’t care!

Heidi Sands

1/5/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Cunningham Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 7:56 AM
Those unwanted thoughts certainly get in the way sometimes distracting us from the important things in our lives. Tom.
Sands Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 8:39 AM
Yes, that's right Tom! Thank you for your comment :) Have a nice day!
Pandit Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 7:46 AM
To be in glee of nature's surroundings is always more blissful and potent than ordinary nuisance thoughts.
Sands Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 8:39 AM
Exactly Vijay! Thank you :)
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