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Unwanted Stilettos

I relish the composure of evening Which slithers far into hidden places That beyond uptown’s jarring noise, I kick off my voguish high heels And wander through burst of evergreen: A quiet grove where young leafage nestles To soothe my breath with deepened ease, That flinging these tight cocktail stilettos Allow a body-mind to unleash after 6 pm toil In Nuvali Park where birds scuttle by… How rhythmic the air, its honeyed waft lifts Enticing a need for wanton barefoot prance; As I feast on thrilled leisure of being shoeless. ------- For Lu Loo's I Got A Darn Na Again Poetry Contest Re-entered 6/13/2019 ............................ From a previous challenge, Night Shoes 5/18/2019
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Delaney Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 5:11 PM
Congratulations Nette: I knew you had a winner here. It just skipped a contest...lol
Ashley Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 11:12 AM
It was a pleasure to return and reread this amazing poem, Nette. A joyful enchantment. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 8:41 PM
My night shoes got N/A too. Congratulations on your deserving First Place. I am happy Luloo had this contest. xxoo
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 10:55 PM
Very nicely done nette. Must be heavenly indeed
Carber Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 1:39 PM
Nicely done Nette--especially liked the first 2 lines. Good luck in the contest [ I had no idea what night shoes were].
Horn Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 12:21 PM
So how do you like all the advertisements now?
Horn Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 12:20 PM
High heel that had so much appeal and could not believe was really real.
Parker Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 10:15 AM
from one extreme to another, stiff and rigid to calm and relaxed, ying an yang...good luck
Callus Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 9:15 AM
Relishing the freedom from restraint...ahh i know the feeling, not from stilettos, but from a pair of brand new shoes which i put on to travel in straight after buying them! HUgs // paul
Rose  Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 5:36 AM
I would skip the stilletos and barefoot it all the way home, Nette. Guess I'm showing my age now. But, I did wear them once upon a time, when I was young and wanted to shine. Love xo
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 1:11 AM
Thanks for the know of 'stilettos', though I had an inkling, best wishes nette, Aloha wk
Sharp Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 1:09 AM
Cheeky, charming and very engaging.
Ashley Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 11:35 PM
‘Enticing a need for wanton barefoot prance’ oh how I adore your poem, Nette. I love the freeing spirit of this enticing piece. Gorgeous! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Delaney Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 8:28 PM
A fun frolic, Nette: Feels amazing to get out high heels and cool your feet in the park. Good Luck in the contest. Huggs, SuZ
Sergi Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 7:51 PM
What a unique poem I once wrote a poem about a lady making music with her stilettos as she briskly walked. My compliments , nette!
Sands Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 5:09 PM
This is great. Freeing and fun :) Well written Nette !
Roper Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 3:23 PM
Very serene, Nette, I am always looking for comfort. good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Pandit Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 3:00 PM
Enjoyed the read..barefoot has its own comfort and style..precious words as always, Nette.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 2:54 PM
Some beautiful wording...wandering through a burst of evergreen, quiet grove of ivy and Nuvali Park where birds scuttle by!
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May 18, 2019 at 1:58 PM
- A great poem, Nette - I prefer barefoot ... nothing is better :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 1:43 PM
Must be a relief on your footsies and to feel the cool grass on your feet . Good luck. Tom
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