Unwanted Love

Unwanted love, like constipation, a pain in the ass
It will upset you for many days 
Once dumped, system cleared, the trouble will pass
You’ll be able to go your separate ways
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Effendi Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 11:41 AM
Haha. Brilliant! Better out the rear than out the front i always say. Love it! Thanks for your comment on my poem Estranged Love. Best wishes... Taha
Haick Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 4:57 PM
hahaha! As Sara said below, 'One way to put it'... I enjoyed this..in a way, Sidney lol...I like directness- Goes to my favs.! Love, Audrey
Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 3:51 PM
One way to put it..Sara
Loveless Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 11:27 AM
(: Cool poem
Sweetheart Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 8:57 PM
Well this is an interesting form Sidney and your lines are funny yet true..luv.. nice play on words as only u can do .. enjoyed tonight with luv..
Wilson Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 7:20 PM
very amusing and sort of wise !!take care~Deb
A   Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 5:50 PM
enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
Culverhouse Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 5:20 PM
so funny!! those caterpillars that can shoot poop out the rectum comes to mind. wouldn't be great to just blow 'em out the rear? when some one hurts you or is unwanted.
Hilliker Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 5:18 PM
lol. I like it!
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