Unveiling

virgin blossom blooms petals drift down in silence spring unveils in white 4/7/2023

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Jim Slaughter

Date: 8/9/2023 10:55:00 AM

Reminds me of my favorite sight each spring...the blooming of the Bradford Pear trees here. Beautiful haiku, Laura.

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/9/2023 12:13:00 PM

Thank you, Jim. I’m happy you enjoyed this one! :)

J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/8/2023 3:47:00 PM

Wonderful and pretty poem! Thanks for writing this admirable masterpiece.

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/8/2023 8:32:00 PM

Thanks so much, JW! So glad you enjoyed this one! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/17/2023 2:43:00 PM

A pretty unveiling…wedding-like!

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/17/2023 2:44:00 PM

Thank you, Kim! I’m glad you liked this! :)

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 4/7/2023 10:52:00 PM

Nice positioning of the bridal Spring on the threshold of fecundity. Elizabeth

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/8/2023 8:20:00 AM

Thank you, Elizabeth! :)