Unveil

‘ Be frank and open-minded to unveil yourself. ‘ - Poet

    UNVEIL

     I swim and sink
          in ocean of your deep emotion!
      I wish to drink
           your dormant desires .
        Why inertness shown?
      
    Supernal elegance you own.
              My sweetheart.
        Why wobbling!
        Unveil your heart.

      Your amorous urge
       surging in your heart!
      Yet, acting introvert !
       Your bubbling blood 
       to flow in flood.
          Why hesitant!
           Act vibrant.

        Feelings not to let chilled.
         Unveil your heart
           My sweetheart.


11/06/22

                           Second place
Writing Challenge ‘Unburden - A  U-word’

Contest by Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kauffman Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:56 AM
Anisha, congratulations on your win! This poem is so innovative in form and creative in thought. Enjoyed. Blessings!
Kendrick Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 7:34 AM
Congratulations on this great winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
La France Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 6:26 AM
Anisha, a wonderful poem and presentation and I love your quote. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Unburden- A ''U'' Word, well done! I hope you will enter my new contest, Writing Challenge "V" Forms with quote inspirations and themes.
Miller Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 8:07 AM
A truly lovely poem; I enjoyed reading it; congratulations, well-deserved!
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