Unveil

‘ Be frank and open-minded to unveil yourself. ‘ - Poet UNVEIL I swim and sink in ocean of your deep emotion! I wish to drink your dormant desires . Why inertness shown? Supernal elegance you own. My sweetheart. Why wobbling! Unveil your heart. Your amorous urge surging in your heart! Yet, acting introvert ! Your bubbling blood to flow in flood. Why hesitant! Act vibrant. Feelings not to let chilled. Unveil your heart My sweetheart. 11/06/22 Second place Writing Challenge ‘Unburden - A U-word’ Contest by Constance La France

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/30/2022 9:56:00 AM

Anisha, congratulations on your win! This poem is so innovative in form and creative in thought. Enjoyed. Blessings!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2022 7:34:00 AM

Congratulations on this great winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara

Constance La France

Date: 11/14/2022 6:26:00 AM

Anisha, a wonderful poem and presentation and I love your quote. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Unburden- A ''U'' Word, well done! I hope you will enter my new contest, Writing Challenge "V" Forms with quote inspirations and themes.

Terry Miller

Date: 11/13/2022 8:07:00 AM

A truly lovely poem; I enjoyed reading it; congratulations, well-deserved!