Notes About The Poem

This chilling, deceptive poem unfolds with a soothing, tender voice that cloaks itself in the comforting imagery of a faithful protector, or maybe not.

Untroubled Skies

I am the warm embrace that breaks the chill,
The steady anchor when the waters rise,
I am the quiet peace that cures your ill,
The golden truth beneath untroubled skies.

I hold your trembling hand against the storm,
I guide your tired steps into the light,
To keep your fragile, weary spirit warm,
And watch you safely through the darkest night.

I am your faithful shield, your closest friend,
The heart that beats in rhythm with your own,
I promise I will guard you to the end,
So you will never have to walk alone.

Step closer now, and let me lock the door—
I am the surgeon, and you are on the floor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 7:28 PM
Interesting finish almost dark. ⭐
Haywood Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 4:04 PM
Yes. I set up a frienship, protection, romance, comfort beginning and twisted the poem at the end. It's called a subverted twist ending. It plays on the terrifying juxtaposition of intimacy and vulnerability, showing how words of comfort can mask absolute control or danger. I don't usually write like this. - Chris
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