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Untraveled Trails

In a mountain valley on a moody summer day dark pink and purple clouds loftily hang above dense dark evergreens the clouds reflect on the narrow stream as it winds along the valley floor a storm is about to brew swaying of bull rushes that line the bank edges among this thick foliage delicate blue flowers bloom this wide picturesque valley has become a boggy area filled with unknown dangers no one would dare to thread beautiful to look at but like the coming storm many dangers can unfold.

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Date: 1/17/2023 7:49:00 AM
Many many congrats on your poem being chosen as POTD - An honor that was bestowed on you.Beauty and danger are often linked - fire and water, a beautiful woman who is a Russian spy - 007 style - petrol containers and a moving vehicle - a truck carrying petrol and traveling through a small town just outside Johannesburg, burst into flames when it lost control and killed 40 people. Excellent write Phil. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/19/2023 10:53:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment Jennifer. It was an honour for sure. love & hugs. phyl
Date: 1/17/2023 6:59:00 AM
Your imagery is wonderful, Phyllis. Beauty with danger within. Congratulations on your POTD.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/19/2023 10:43:00 AM
Thanks for your comment and yes beauty and danger coexist in nature. love phyl
Date: 1/14/2023 6:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD! Beautiful poem with stunningly descriptive imagery! BW ~ Mala
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/15/2023 10:33:00 AM
Thank you for your comment Mala. Much appreciated. love phyl
Date: 1/11/2023 2:11:00 PM
Hey Phyllis just read UNTRAVELED TRAILS. "Among This thick foliage delicate blue Flowers bloom." Perfect Imagery. Congratulations on Your POTW. Enjoy! VB Rogers blk panther
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/15/2023 10:41:00 AM
Thanks for your comment Val. love phyl
Date: 1/11/2023 11:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.w., with this particularly beautiful poem dear Phyllis :) - hugs
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/11/2023 1:07:00 PM
Thanks Anne-lise for your comment and your kind words. Another one of those days here today. love phyl
Date: 1/10/2023 12:02:00 AM
A good poem. Congratulations on your POTW.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/11/2023 1:06:00 PM
Thanks Jeanette for your comment on my poem. Much appreciated. love phyl
Date: 1/9/2023 12:54:00 PM
Phyllis, lovely poem and congratulations on the POEM OF THE WEEK honor, Constance
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/11/2023 1:05:00 PM
Thanks Constance for your comment. The picture I seen was on face book and it inspired me to write on a moody day. love phyl
Date: 1/9/2023 6:25:00 AM
Nicely done ON A MOODY SUMMER DAY. Congratulations on your POTW
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/11/2023 1:03:00 PM
Thanks for your comment and yes it was done on a moody day. lol love phyl
Date: 1/9/2023 5:05:00 AM
Congratulations on you POTW! Your imagery stunning! Paulette
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/11/2023 1:02:00 PM
Thanks for your comment Paulette. Much appreciated. love phyl
Date: 1/8/2023 7:21:00 PM
"Many dangers unfold." I completely agree. As I was reading your words, simply embracing the beauty, the deeper meaning within truly caught my attention. You're right, we must watch out for hidden traps. Congratulations Phyllis, on Poem of the Week. My best to you, in the New Year. Hugs, Brandy
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/11/2023 1:01:00 PM
Thank you Brandy for your comment on my poem. Also wishing you the best in the new year. Beauty and danger can both be in one place. love phyl
Date: 1/8/2023 10:22:00 AM
Phyllis, beautiful imagery, congratulations on POTW!
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/8/2023 10:36:00 AM
Thank you Tania for your comment on my poem. love phyl
Date: 1/8/2023 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. Your "Untraveled Trails" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed day/week..................
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/8/2023 10:35:00 AM
Thank you Paula for your comment on my poem. Have a blessed week. love phyl
Date: 1/8/2023 5:05:00 AM
reads like a metaphoric dissertation on the political and social chaos that abounds in the "swamp". Nicely written phyllis, hope I didn't read too much into its natural beauty.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/8/2023 10:34:00 AM
Thanks John for your comment and yes it can be thought of both ways. We sometimes do not see what that swamp is hiding from us. love phyl
Date: 1/8/2023 3:39:00 AM
Love the imagery in your verse Phyllis, congratulations on the honour of POTW. Tom
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/8/2023 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Tom for your kind words. The beauty and the dangers in a place of beauty really struck my imagination. love phyl
Date: 1/3/2023 6:39:00 AM
Enjoyed this poem Phyllis…nothing like a storm brewing l love it! Well described…..Debx
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/8/2023 10:21:00 AM
Thanks Deb this poem came from a posted picture. love phyl
Date: 1/2/2023 5:57:00 PM
Love it, you have an amazing gift in the beauty of poetry and storytelling, love ya
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/3/2023 11:50:00 AM
Thanks Stephan for your comment. It was a picture that inspired this write. Sometimes in beauty we do not see the dangers underneath. love phyl

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