Untouched Moments

Majestic wetlands 
Reflecting tenuous limps 
Under a blue quilt 




Inspired by Raul Moreno’s “Tranquility” contest !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/7/2011 10:40:00 AM
Stopping in to read some of your excellent poetry today Laura. Hope to stop back again soon and read some more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/5/2010 6:04:00 AM
Inspirational Haiku Laura, and well deserved of it's win in Raul's contest >> James
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Date: 4/17/2010 4:11:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Laura. I hope you are having a wonderful inspiration filled weekend and wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/17/2010 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tranquility" Contest, Laura!! ENjoy! Peace, AUdrey
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Date: 4/17/2010 1:50:00 PM
Congrats Laura on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. an amazing write and wonderful win for u to so enjoy ...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/17/2010 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations, Laura! Already commented on this poem and am glad to see you in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/17/2010 12:26:00 PM
Hooray for you Laura!! I knew this was a winner when first read it! Congratulations! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/17/2010 11:56:00 AM
Laura, congratulation in placing 3rd in my contest...Raul
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Date: 4/16/2010 9:50:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. A nice imagination.
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:20:00 PM
Good use of imagery to convey this scene. I like the perspective in the last line. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:07:00 PM
Majestic is a very creative word. I have never read it in a Haiku. I love haikus . Me and my daughter and son are trying them out at work. This is a very good one .
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Date: 4/16/2010 5:43:00 PM
Great descriptive write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 4/16/2010 5:01:00 PM
Oh how lovely Laura .. what a perfect piece for the photo..good luck in Raul's contest.. as far as my Pendulum.. appreciate your kudos and maybe u will have a contest where I can enter it? does it pass the form test? thankxxx ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/16/2010 4:22:00 PM
very nice!!!
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Date: 4/16/2010 4:09:00 PM
Love the line about the tenuous limbs, Laura. Nice interpretation of the photo. Best wishes in the contest. Carolyn
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Date: 4/16/2010 4:04:00 PM
Love this....each line could be a winning poem or monoku!! Love this! :)
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