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Untouched Moments

Majestic wetlands 
Reflecting tenuous limps 
Under a blue quilt 




Inspired by Raul Moreno’s “Tranquility” contest !

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Carol Sunshine Brown

April 7, 2011 at 10:40 AM

Stopping in to read some of your excellent poetry today Laura. Hope to stop back again soon and read some more. Love, Carol

James Fraser

June 5, 2010 at 6:04 AM

Inspirational Haiku Laura, and well deserved of it's win in Raul's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 17, 2010 at 4:11 PM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Laura. I hope you are having a wonderful inspiration filled weekend and wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

April 17, 2010 at 2:04 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tranquility" Contest, Laura!! ENjoy! Peace, AUdrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 17, 2010 at 1:50 PM

Congrats Laura on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. an amazing write and wonderful win for u to so enjoy ...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

April 17, 2010 at 12:44 PM

Congratulations, Laura! Already commented on this poem and am glad to see you in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

April 17, 2010 at 12:26 PM

Hooray for you Laura!! I knew this was a winner when first read it! Congratulations! Love, Carrie

Raul Moreno

April 17, 2010 at 11:56 AM

Laura, congratulation in placing 3rd in my contest...Raul

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 16, 2010 at 9:50 PM

Good luck in the contest. A nice imagination.

April 16, 2010 at 6:20 PM

Good use of imagery to convey this scene. I like the perspective in the last line. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Skat A

April 16, 2010 at 6:07 PM

Majestic is a very creative word. I have never read it in a Haiku. I love haikus . Me and my daughter and son are trying them out at work. This is a very good one .

Sara Kendrick

April 16, 2010 at 5:43 PM

Great descriptive write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 16, 2010 at 5:01 PM

Oh how lovely Laura .. what a perfect piece for the photo..good luck in Raul's contest.. as far as my Pendulum.. appreciate your kudos and maybe u will have a contest where I can enter it? does it pass the form test? thankxxx ..luv.. Linda-Marie..