Get Your Premium Membership

Untouched moments

Majestic wetlands Reflecting tenuous limps Under a blue quilt Inspired by Raul Moreno’s “Tranquility” contest !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/7/2011 10:40:00 AM
Stopping in to read some of your excellent poetry today Laura. Hope to stop back again soon and read some more. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/5/2010 6:04:00 AM
Inspirational Haiku Laura, and well deserved of it's win in Raul's contest >> James
Login to Reply
Date: 4/17/2010 4:11:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Laura. I hope you are having a wonderful inspiration filled weekend and wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 4/17/2010 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tranquility" Contest, Laura!! ENjoy! Peace, AUdrey
Login to Reply
Date: 4/17/2010 1:50:00 PM
Congrats Laura on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. an amazing write and wonderful win for u to so enjoy ...luv.. Linda-Marie..
Login to Reply
Date: 4/17/2010 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations, Laura! Already commented on this poem and am glad to see you in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 4/17/2010 12:26:00 PM
Hooray for you Laura!! I knew this was a winner when first read it! Congratulations! Love, Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 4/17/2010 11:56:00 AM
Laura, congratulation in placing 3rd in my contest...Raul
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2010 9:50:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. A nice imagination.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2010 6:20:00 PM
Good use of imagery to convey this scene. I like the perspective in the last line. Good luck in the contest. Karen
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2010 6:07:00 PM
Majestic is a very creative word. I have never read it in a Haiku. I love haikus . Me and my daughter and son are trying them out at work. This is a very good one .
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2010 5:43:00 PM
Great descriptive write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2010 5:01:00 PM
Oh how lovely Laura .. what a perfect piece for the photo..good luck in Raul's contest.. as far as my Pendulum.. appreciate your kudos and maybe u will have a contest where I can enter it? does it pass the form test? thankxxx ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2010 4:22:00 PM
very nice!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2010 4:09:00 PM
Love the line about the tenuous limbs, Laura. Nice interpretation of the photo. Best wishes in the contest. Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2010 4:04:00 PM
Love this....each line could be a winning poem or monoku!! Love this! :)
Login to Reply