Untouched

Take from me that which you will Those things that I possess Strip from me the trinkets That speak of my success Look at me with jaundiced eye With disdain on your face Treat me as subordinate Keep me in my place Speak to me with vitriol Mock my point of view Contradict my every word Their meaning misconstrue I can overlook these things As you strive to denigrate Because the measure of a man Is forgiving those who hate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Wesley Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 7:02 PM
A very hard thing to do and yet it is a command to love thy neighbor. Beautiful poetry that has a moral in the heart of it.
Quigley Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 11:15 AM
Thank you Elizabeth
Squyres Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 9:01 AM
To be untouched by shallowness, meaness and green envy takes strenghth of mind. Enjoyed this on the first read, and now the second. Congrats on your win in Brians 179 contest.
Quigley Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 11:16 AM
Thank you
Brown Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 6:19 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#179 Contest" Bob. Love, Carol
Hunter Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 6:02 AM
True...well done and congrats!
Squyres Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 9:04 PM
Lots to forgive, seems to me. But, I like the moral and inspirational tone in the last 2 lines. Directness in speech in the verses are strong. Enjoyed !!! Congrats on your winning placement !!
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 5:57 PM
very strong message in this one. a well deserved win, Bob. congratulations.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 4:12 PM
Wow, Bob! Well-written words of wisdom! It's too bad more people cannot forgive. Congratulations!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Cooper Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 5:40 PM
this is truly a gem Bob.
Quigley Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 4:36 PM
Thank you Lisa
Macmillan Avatar
April 21, 2012 at 8:51 AM
Not only did I fave this, Bob, but I've printed this out and it will shortly be taped to my fridge. This really spoke to me, not only on an artistic level (this is sublime, rich, oh such a tender wringing of the language!) but also on a spiritual and PERSONAL level. Thank you for this gem which should be published. Seriously. I'm not a gushy commentor unless gushing is due. Please, try to share this with more than soup. If you are a church goer, please please share this with the flock!
Bauer Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 3:31 PM
wow! very profound and beautifully expressed. i love the flow of your rhyme and of course, the message of your words.
Quigley Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 8:53 PM
Thank you Ilene
Kearley Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 1:49 PM
~Bravo~Bravo~ X-celent words of wisdom here Bob! Very nice! :-)
Quigley Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 2:13 PM
Appreciate it Dan. Thank you
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