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Untouchable

She is always searching for his love. It looks so close, like she could reach out and touch it. She tries but it's in vain. She could've no sooner reached his heart than she could've reached a star.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/1/2011 12:33:00 PM
Excellent!
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Date: 1/28/2011 8:49:00 PM
good use of metaphores in this one Heather, deep write, sometimes a heart may be outta reach but we never quit reaching for it:), enjoyed your write ..p.d.
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Date: 1/27/2011 8:16:00 PM
Was she in a movie theater wearing 3D glasses when she tried to reach out and touch his love? Good descriptive wording.
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