Untouchable

She is always searching for his love. It looks so close, like she could reach out and 
touch it. She tries but it's in vain. She could've no sooner reached his heart than she 
could've reached a star.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wegenast Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 12:33 PM
Excellent!
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January 28, 2011 at 8:49 PM
good use of metaphores in this one Heather, deep write, sometimes a heart may be outta reach but we never quit reaching for it:), enjoyed your write ..p.d.
Pettit Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 8:16 PM
Was she in a movie theater wearing 3D glasses when she tried to reach out and touch his love? Good descriptive wording.
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