Untold Tale

Colors are disappearing like loss of innocence
Hearing the voices from outside like a baby in the cradle
Something is murmuring just like a specific sound
The sunlight is falling and making the body hot
No movement in the body
Eyes are open; film of his past is going on
Fly is flying over his eye
He is calm and peaceful, silently shouting with pain
Pain of soul, pain of fear, pain of loneliness, pain of unknown misdeeds
Days and nights are passing, no one comes
He feels that time has stayed due to pain
For one second pain has gone
He thinks years have passed
 Nothing is changed, nor his situation, nor atmosphere
Thread of life is breaking, bit by bit
He is praying, fly is flying
It is sitting on the half black and white side of the eye
Pray for one time to blink the eyes
This thing is irritating him, forgetting about everything except remembering the hellish thing
He blinks the eye; the thread of life is broken
Now there is no irritating thing 
Loss of every physical sense and loss of to be lost
Journey towards unknown…………….?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/28/2018 10:22:00 AM
" journey toward unknown ",is he dead? And again I must say that you write really really well, your choice of words and the way you describe them is really really beautiful,it made the reader interested in your poems
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Dia Zafar
Date: 2/28/2018 11:18:00 AM
thanks, and yup he is dead i just narrate the feeling before dying.
Date: 8/26/2017 10:15:00 AM
I like how you play around with your words. Powerful poem
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Dia Zafar
Date: 8/28/2017 11:59:00 AM
Thanks Ayathandwa, your praise of words having worth for me.
Date: 8/26/2017 12:50:00 AM
Wow Dia, what a compelling read this was! Truly a masterful write. Congratulations on having it featured! Aloha, Connie
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Dia Zafar
Date: 8/28/2017 12:04:00 PM
Thanks Connie, and thanks again for such a marvellous appreciation.
Date: 5/30/2017 12:53:00 PM
Death? that must sound like it...it is one thing we hate to face, ..well done.
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Dia Zafar
Date: 8/28/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thanks Asad and sorry for late reply. Yup That it is true, no one can escape it and at the end every living being will have to face it.
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