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Untold Tale

Colors are disappearing like loss of innocence Hearing the voices from outside like a baby in the cradle Something is murmuring just like a specific sound The sunlight is falling and making the body hot No movement in the body Eyes are open; film of his past is going on Fly is flying over his eye He is calm and peaceful, silently shouting with pain Pain of soul, pain of fear, pain of loneliness, pain of unknown misdeeds Days and nights are passing, no one comes He feels that time has stayed due to pain For one second pain has gone He thinks years have passed Nothing is changed, nor his situation, nor atmosphere Thread of life is breaking, bit by bit He is praying, fly is flying It is sitting on the half black and white side of the eye Pray for one time to blink the eyes This thing is irritating him, forgetting about everything except remembering the hellish thing He blinks the eye; the thread of life is broken Now there is no irritating thing Loss of every physical sense and loss of to be lost Journey towards unknown…………….?

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Date: 2/28/2018 10:22:00 AM
" journey toward unknown ",is he dead? And again I must say that you write really really well, your choice of words and the way you describe them is really really beautiful,it made the reader interested in your poems
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Dia Zafar
Date: 2/28/2018 11:18:00 AM
thanks, and yup he is dead i just narrate the feeling before dying.
Date: 8/26/2017 10:15:00 AM
I like how you play around with your words. Powerful poem
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Dia Zafar
Date: 8/28/2017 11:59:00 AM
Thanks Ayathandwa, your praise of words having worth for me.
Date: 8/26/2017 12:50:00 AM
Wow Dia, what a compelling read this was! Truly a masterful write. Congratulations on having it featured! Aloha, Connie
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Dia Zafar
Date: 8/28/2017 12:04:00 PM
Thanks Connie, and thanks again for such a marvellous appreciation.
Date: 5/30/2017 12:53:00 PM
Death? that must sound like it...it is one thing we hate to face, ..well done.
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Dia Zafar
Date: 8/28/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thanks Asad and sorry for late reply. Yup That it is true, no one can escape it and at the end every living being will have to face it.

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