Untold Love Story

Once upon a time came along
my gift from above that 
came down to earth to enlighten her 
beauty around the atmosphere 
& as her swaying hips 
felt as if wind passing across
my face
having other envy because the don't have 
any body to embrace.
tired of all the trying 
so sicc of beautiful women crying
yet I stand before you and as
we gazed upon each others
eyes and examined bright sense of humor
inside something pierces my
heart in which each beat gets intense
thats part on of knowing that your my inspiration 
its just common sense.
Paint the picture of how you
felt about me when you first met me
you may say it was unbelievable
love at first sight,
our bond was so good
to be true but yet I couldn't 
take my eyes of you 
looking into your eyes 
it reminds me about 
the beautiful
appreciative skyz
think about it this way
was once a tragic and painful ending
can one day be another 
start of a new beginning
and as our untold love story 
becomes reality
harmonizing our true feelings
through the power
of poetry
decyphering our inner thoughts in
which we breakdown into 
details your quality & quantity
and as days went by  our dreams fly,
the epitome of our relationship as an image of what 
adam & eve had
its something that we have today
but as the moving mountains 
developing a negative into a positive 
with results of an
indefinite solution.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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