Untold

Inside a cocoon, a heart lays with story untold Countless times, it attempted to unfold But the walls within to it, viciously holds Such is a selfish shade of love That puts its gains all above

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Femi Adebayo

Date: 1/8/2016 12:52:00 PM

Lovely mate!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2015 2:53:00 AM

Jet, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 12/24/2015 2:00:00 AM

Jet, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT