Unto These Clouds

the sun
dipping her wings
unto 
clouds
stirring up
the 
hallowed ground
but
where 
did she go
to
her mirror
before
the
thunder and lightning came
unto these clouds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 20, 2009 at 10:16 AM
A lovely piece....that brings a peaceful image. Nicely done, Gregory! ~ Carrie
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