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Yea...I am upset
Ticked off to say the least....
TIME!!! 
A real great friend you are!
ARrrgggHHHH!!!
I am just....cho...
sad.
TIME...TiMe.........(sigh)time....
what's your reason this time?

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Karena Brown

January 18, 2009 at 12:04 AM

A little overdue but THANK YOU soooooooooo much to you guys. I am truly humbled by the support. I'm still in lala land about even placing...LOL...I still giggle like an infatuated school girl over the whole thing. THANK YOU soooo much PoetrySoup and the rest of the community. Thank you..... :-)

Elaine George

January 13, 2009 at 6:20 PM

Very clever and witty. Congratulations on your well deserve3d win, Karena. Love, Lainie

Sue Mason

January 8, 2009 at 12:56 PM

This is just too great!! Love the play with the word as in TiMe (tie me) which of course it does to all of us. Wonderful writing here, Karena and I look forward to reading more that you have done. Very well-deserved selection to be a feature here this week at the Soup. Congratulations!!

January 7, 2009 at 4:47 PM

Much poured into this concise poem. Congratulations on being chosen as one of the contest winners. Keep on writing! Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr.

January 5, 2009 at 6:35 AM

Congratulations Karena on your poem being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 5, 2009 at 4:53 AM

Congratulations on being a finalist and having your poetry featured. Love Carol

Michael Jordan

January 4, 2009 at 10:07 AM

Karena - Seems to me like a double congratulations is in order – A Finalist and a featured poem – Great Job – God Bless, MJ

Sharon Winter

January 4, 2009 at 6:34 AM

Congrats on your win in the PS contest! Love, Shar

Stephen Gentles

December 16, 2008 at 12:27 PM

Congrats 2 U 2!

John Heck

November 30, 2008 at 4:17 AM

Karena - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Sharon Winter

November 11, 2008 at 9:16 AM

Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

November 3, 2008 at 7:10 AM

Its good to read a fellow Jamaican work. Loved the piece. Hope to read you again

Sue Mason

November 1, 2008 at 4:45 PM

I love your "ARrrgggHHH" ... LOL ... this is a wonderful write, Karena!! Congratulations on being a "frist round survivor" in the PoetrySoup contest and best of wishes to you.

Michael Jordan

November 1, 2008 at 4:29 PM

Karena - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 27, 2008 at 3:49 PM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

P Sheart

October 27, 2008 at 3:37 PM

Hi Kerena Congrats on making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals! Love Light Truth Patricia

Karena Brown

July 14, 2008 at 8:40 AM

Thanx Rhoda...the title came at the time I was feeling that way. I couldn't find another title b-cuz I honestly couldn't put my emotion(s) into words and still can't. The situation really did suck and still does. I agree with u tho...it's best to leave it untitled. Thanx again.

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