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Untitled Haiku, Graced

untitled haiku, Graced spring took my legs to paralysis winter brought my soul passage ————————————————————————— (c)sally Young eslinger 1/24/21 Thanks be to God

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Sand Blown

Date: 1/24/2021 11:26:00 AM

...yes...it's...the life in the years that sees beyond the kernal to the expansion..... stan sand.....by the way, there should be a message in your poetry soup-mail box

Sally Eslinger
Date: 1/25/2021 7:22:00 PM

Stan, “a kernel to the expansion” Wish I’d written that. Valuing all your words and support.......sally

Sally Eslinger
Date: 1/25/2021 7:18:00 PM

Stan, “a kernel to the expansion” Wish I’d written that. Valuing all your words and support.......sally

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/24/2021 11:12:00 AM

It's a cleansing...Nice imagery here.

Sally Eslinger
Date: 1/25/2021 7:22:00 PM

Many thanks, Arturo. I hadn’t thought of it in terms of a Cleansing, but I think you’ve got a point...one God and I need to chat about.