Untitled Haiku, Graced

untitled haiku, Graced

spring took my legs
to paralysis
winter brought my soul passage

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(c)sally Young eslinger 1/24/21
Thanks be to God
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Blown Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 11:26 AM
...yes...it's...the life in the years that sees beyond the kernal to the expansion..... stan sand.....by the way, there should be a message in your poetry soup-mail box
Eslinger Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 7:22 PM
Stan, “a kernel to the expansion” Wish I’d written that. Valuing all your words and support.......sally
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January 25, 2021 at 7:18 PM
Stan, “a kernel to the expansion” Wish I’d written that. Valuing all your words and support.......sally
Michael Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 11:12 AM
It's a cleansing...Nice imagery here.
Eslinger Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 7:22 PM
Many thanks, Arturo. I hadn’t thought of it in terms of a Cleansing, but I think you’ve got a point...one God and I need to chat about.
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