Untitled Haiku July

untitled HAIKU, July

spring passed in hospital
at home my things sorted in eight trunks —
am I dead?

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(c) sally Young eslinger

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 1/18/2021 12:48:00 PM
sounds like you were really sick from what I am seeing in comments below. hope you get well fast.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 1/19/2021 2:48:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. My entire sine s ttanm, -6 opeatns. Last Mayi became sudden aaed re-elected n lots f y poems. This past Sept try op again to untangle some nerves hoping that would help. WEll it has! But it’s a LONG road to go. Just relearning to stand and walk. Sure is nice getting to know you & your work
Date: 1/16/2021 5:41:00 PM
Sounds unpleasant.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 1/18/2021 9:08:00 AM
Kim, well it was, is still. They are piled along the wall and I’m not able yet to go through them. When my m-I-L died I was asked to pack up her things, so these boxes remind me of that. Can’t wait to get well and fix this
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2021 4:54:00 AM
Oh my! I hope your health shows great improvement and excitement prevails to finally unpack and get back to normalcy! Nice to meet you too, sweet lady.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 1/16/2021 5:54:00 PM
Right. I’m still not well enough to unpack them. They sit to my left along the wall, taunting me. Not one of my happier pieces, but it chose this way to get out. Thanks to you, Kim, for comment. It IS happy to meet you.
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