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Sep.7- 2025

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Untitled Couplet

In rich ruby rings of radiance, the sun comes out bold, 
Smearing and splotching the sky with liquid gold.

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Dr. Vandana Sharma

September 8, 2025 at 10:17 PM

The liquid gold how endlessly flows.....

Kim Rodrigues

September 8, 2025 at 10:34 AM

Just beautiful, Valsa, from rich rubies to liquid gold!

Joseph P. DiMino

September 8, 2025 at 7:09 AM

Very stirring visually. Great imagery! Well done. Enjoyed.

Sotto Poet

September 8, 2025 at 2:51 AM

Well written. "In rich ruby rings of radiance" is a beautiful way to describe the way the sun beams transport us to different places and times, each with its own unique golden energy. Best for a win

Andrea Dietrich

September 8, 2025 at 1:25 AM

Simply gorgeous

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 8, 2025 at 1:25 AM

- Beautiful written, Valsa :) - A clear winner in my eyes, good luck :) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough

September 7, 2025 at 6:37 PM

I like the colorful personification in your poem. Your poem cheers me.

sara Etgen-Baker

September 7, 2025 at 5:59 PM

It's as if your poem is a painting come to life with your golden words--beautiful and graceful. Loved this alliteration: rich ruby ring of radiance Well done, dear Valsa!

CayCay Godwin

September 7, 2025 at 11:42 AM

Hi, Valsa, this is a beautiful couplet, love the 'feel' it paints. I think you meant to type rings, not ring. LOVE the image of the sun being a male and one that cheers. Very creative. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Valsa George

September 7, 2025 at 8:40 PM

Thank you so much dear Cay Cay for the comment and for your correction.. I didn't notice it. Yes, I meant Ruby rings of radiance.

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