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A poignant poem with the bird metaphor, deep in fine tail rhyme form wow. Kudos! >>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<~~~\\\¤¤¤««««»»»»»» Plz also read and comment my newest poem too

Will not remember, at my age it happens so often. I like the way you put it in words. Wondering does the title have anything to do with it???

a touching and deep poem, beautifully written Paige. I like the tail-rhyme form. Hugs, SAra

A moving poem that is so heartfelt.

Ah sweet paige, even in angst your words flow so melodiously. I love especially “ like with a shadow, the tongue surrenders there is no way to this darkness” wow that hits deep for me! So touching and moving! A very heartfelt poem this is. Your metaphors are as always so very authentic! Pleasure reading you today. Sending you light, always

sweetly intense, paige...angst is your main card!

A deep poem depicting that mind and body is still in control of soul. It is not that the Heart will not remember ~ it is that the mind clutches the Heart, trying to subjugate it. The use of birds singing through feathers is a good metaphor to use to depict that singing continues irrespective of state of body-mind-tongue. The final line is interesting- both darkness & light has a way, as well as a no way : it can just arrive and leave. Good tail-rhyme. I enjoyed, Paige : have a peaceful weekend. Xx

How profound is this poem, and how full of metaphor it is! It appears that she fails to break free of whatever may be the memory of a feeling that did not prove to be successful.

"A shadow left lying to her breast'.... a powerful line. It could be the memory of an emotional attachment gone awry, which she is not able to forget. Well written , dear Paige.

Yes. As Anaya says. This is certainly one to ponder. Very nice, Paige.

Perhaps a secret key in the mind to unlock the memory once recalled and journey forward through the shadow and into the light. The carcas left behind will recycle~ a good one for ponder, Paige. May blessings