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contrails streak the sky.
vaporous cotton
left by silver dots in a hurry.
my mind takes flight, but
my feet are grounded.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Thomas Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 1:00 PM
Happens ro my mind often Oliver :)
Mckeithan Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 1:12 PM
Hello FJ, I work in a non-creative job and sometimes have the opportunity to day dream and I wrote this during one of my day dream moments. Oliver
Gauthier Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 10:08 PM
Very pleasant tanka, Oliver.
Mckeithan Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:08 AM
Thank you Line. Oliver
Sands Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 7:28 AM
I like this one Oliver. Nice line, left by silver dots in a hurry :)
Mckeithan Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 7:39 AM
Thank you Heidi. Oliver
Mckeithan Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 7:39 AM
Thank you Heidi. Oliver
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