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Down, down, down we spiral into the great unknown. Dark, dark darker becomes our world till bitter were entombed. Down, down, down we go into the endless crag, into a world of emptiness where our senses start to drag. Strong, strong, strong we hold until our dying day and when our final destination comes we simply fade away.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/25/2013 8:16:00 PM

Terry, it’s always amazing to see and feel such imagery. the spiral of falling down... i wonder if this poem is related to your "deep is the hole." wishing my destination to stay as vivid as the sky... xox~ Linda

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/21/2013 7:58:00 AM

A dark write well executed. The repetition adds and is complimentary to your write. Well done, Terry. Licia :-)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/20/2013 2:25:00 AM

I was very touched by this write, Terry! It's so true, my friend. We are like a flower...here today, gone tomorrow...but for the time allotted to us, we are to bring beauty into the world! Thanks for doing that with this poem!