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The sunlight 
shines through 
the clouds
as rain falls 
into the gray eyes
of a mother doing 
laundry
while her children
play house.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Jordan Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 7:07 PM
Very nice! I'll be looking for more from you, whoever you are.
Mitchell Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 5:25 PM
excellent detail and write just felt like writing and shared a emotion filled poem great job!
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