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summer is leaving soon autumn leaves change colour vividly then fall

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Stephen Parker

Date: 10/11/2013 10:05:00 AM

Carol you have written a gem. I love the ironic twist that you correctly placed in the last, two lines.

Carol Fillmore
Date: 10/11/2013 10:28:00 AM

Stephen thank you so much for your comment! Very appreciated:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2010 4:15:00 PM

Hey, carol if we went by that "first line" rule for titles on THIS one, it would be about summer! hahaha. LUv, Andrea

Susan Palli

Date: 9/2/2010 8:02:00 AM

great job!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2010 5:11:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Carol. Thank you for your kind words and I look forward to reading more of yourpoetry when I return. I will not be reading poetry for a few days as I will be gone from Friday until Monday. I wish you a weekend filled with good health, love, and loads of inspiration. Love and Blessings, Carol