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summer
is leaving
soon autumn leaves
change colour vividly
then fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Parker Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 10:05 AM
Carol you have written a gem. I love the ironic twist that you correctly placed in the last, two lines.
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October 11, 2013 at 10:28 AM
Stephen thank you so much for your comment! Very appreciated:)
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 4:15 PM
Hey, carol if we went by that "first line" rule for titles on THIS one, it would be about summer! hahaha. LUv, Andrea
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September 2, 2010 at 8:02 AM
great job!
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September 2, 2010 at 5:11 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Carol. Thank you for your kind words and I look forward to reading more of yourpoetry when I return. I will not be reading poetry for a few days as I will be gone from Friday until Monday. I wish you a weekend filled with good health, love, and loads of inspiration. Love and Blessings, Carol
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