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Bright Flashes of Light Illuminating the sky.... Independence Day

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Charles Henderson

Date: 7/2/2010 7:32:00 AM

This is very good visual. It's a shame poems have to compete with movies when making their point. When I read your last line all I could see was that big ufo over the white house. But I certainly wouldn't change it. Charles

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/1/2010 2:14:00 PM

Hip Hip Hooray.. Tirzah .. a great shot at the winners circle again... life in every line and nice crisp words and scenes.. good luck... with luv from the "Sweetheart" watching the magic in Hawai ... boom boom boom ....

Larry Belt

Date: 7/1/2010 8:55:00 AM

Great write good luck in the contest.....Larry