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Bright Flashes of Light Illuminating the sky.... Independence Day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/2/2010 7:32:00 AM
This is very good visual. It's a shame poems have to compete with movies when making their point. When I read your last line all I could see was that big ufo over the white house. But I certainly wouldn't change it. Charles
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Date: 7/1/2010 2:14:00 PM
Hip Hip Hooray.. Tirzah .. a great shot at the winners circle again... life in every line and nice crisp words and scenes.. good luck... with luv from the "Sweetheart" watching the magic in Hawai ... boom boom boom ....
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Date: 7/1/2010 8:55:00 AM
Great write good luck in the contest.....Larry
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