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my poetry is
      ancient pottery
    cracked and broken
  buried
           abandoned remnants
       of a once good
    civilization

on writing and wordsfree verse

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Jerry Dinzes

July 23, 2010 at 9:01 AM

Oops, wanted to give this a rating...

Jerry Dinzes

July 23, 2010 at 9:00 AM

AWESOME! I really enjoy the 'concrete' aspect of this piece. I don't see shape use very well very often. Keep digging my friend...

Vesna Arsenich

July 23, 2010 at 8:32 AM

Congratulations, it is truly captivating and creatively executed thought!

Juan Paolo Galua

July 21, 2010 at 11:05 PM

my gosh....this is so original...congratulations...you really deserve it!

Harry Horsman

July 21, 2010 at 8:55 PM

congrats on your featured poem, awesome. it looks like your poetry has resurfaced. Harry

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson

July 21, 2010 at 8:10 PM

CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR POEM BEING FEATURED. LOVE RHONDA HERO

Adeleke Adeite

July 19, 2010 at 11:08 AM

Congrats Sean on having your poem being featured this week, enjoy the honor and keep writing. Love, always Adeleke

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 19, 2010 at 5:13 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sean. Love, Carol

Janette Fisher

July 18, 2010 at 6:51 AM

Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Jan

June 3, 2010 at 12:19 PM

Interesting perspective. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen