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my poetry is ancient pottery cracked and broken buried abandoned remnants of a once good civilization

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/23/2010 9:01:00 AM
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Date: 7/23/2010 9:00:00 AM
AWESOME! I really enjoy the 'concrete' aspect of this piece. I don't see shape use very well very often. Keep digging my friend...
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Date: 7/23/2010 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations, it is truly captivating and creatively executed thought!
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Date: 7/21/2010 11:05:00 PM
my gosh....this is so original...congratulations...you really deserve it!
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Date: 7/21/2010 8:55:00 PM
congrats on your featured poem, awesome. it looks like your poetry has resurfaced. Harry
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Date: 7/21/2010 8:10:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR POEM BEING FEATURED. LOVE RHONDA HERO
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Date: 7/19/2010 11:08:00 AM
Congrats Sean on having your poem being featured this week, enjoy the honor and keep writing. Love, always Adeleke
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Date: 7/19/2010 5:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sean. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:51:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Jan
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Date: 6/3/2010 12:19:00 PM
Interesting perspective. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 6/3/2010 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Sean. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/8/2010 6:42:00 AM
Congratulations on being fatured. GBU. Ernilando
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Date: 4/8/2010 3:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Sean. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2010 6:45:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/4/2010 5:39:00 PM
Good use of imagery for a creative view. I really liked this one. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Karen
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Date: 4/4/2010 4:48:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, good one!! congrats on the featured poem.
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Date: 4/4/2010 3:40:00 PM
A very interesting way to describe one's poetry! congrats on being featured. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/4/2010 2:05:00 PM
Sean, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 2/15/2010 11:20:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Sean. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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