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	In the depth of night I crept
	and slowly witnessed a being glowing
	bilious to ponder 
			       and sat
	sat down on the bed
		of which i had crawled out of already
	i looked up
	bright - ah - bright
	crackling in my heart
	and it groaned
			      and waved
	i waved
	all in the depth of night

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/5/2020 3:43:00 PM

Pleased I stumbled on this delightful poem, Ada; I'm positively impressed!! Welcome to Soup! ~ Regards // paul

Ada Daveed
Date: 11/2/2020 7:16:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paul! I apologize for replying so late, but I sincerely appreciate the comment :)

Adrian Crevan

Date: 6/2/2020 6:37:00 PM

Well established analogy and descriptive elaboration just cradled right through the darkest of times. Its just amazing. Well done. All the best and Welcome to the world of writers

Ada Daveed
Date: 6/5/2020 2:34:00 PM

Thank you so much, Adrian! I appreciate it considerably.

John Watt

Date: 5/31/2020 1:16:00 AM

Ada, this is deep and thought-provoking. Welcome to Poetry Soup, I wish you all the best here. I believe you will find it a wonderful community of mutual support and encouragement ~ John

Ada Daveed
Date: 6/1/2020 8:18:00 PM

Oh goodness, thank you so much, John! I sincerely appreciate it.