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The doorway waited, silent, for someone who never arrived.



1427 MONOKU LINE
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Contest Judged:  11/29/2025 10:36:00 PM
( 1st Place )

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 6:48 AM
Quite sad… Congrats!
Drowley Avatar
December 5, 2025 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations. You captured emptiness so well.
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 8:39 AM
Excellent. Congrats on the win
Miller Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 8:04 AM
Hauntingly, sadly beautiful, congratulations
Watts Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 7:46 PM
Hi Rowena Well done quite a haunting Monoku but effective Congratulation Cheers Christine
Velasco Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 1:49 AM
Thanks! I’m glad my little Monoku managed to haunt ( in a good way!) your words made my day!
Kendrick Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 4:06 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Delightful work. Sara K
Velasco Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 5:09 AM
Thank you, Sara… I’m truly grateful for your kind words. Your encouragement makes this win even more special. (-;
Somadas Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 2:02 AM
emotionally resonant.. Congrats on your win Rowena..
Velasco Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 5:07 AM
Oh, thank you so much! Your congratulations truly warms my heart.
Poet Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 1:51 AM
Congratulations, Rowena, you won the trophy in the contest! Your Monoku is so tragically gorgeous.
Velasco Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 5:06 AM
I really appreciate your kind words! Winning feels wonderful but messages like yours make it even more meaningful. Thank you from the heart.
La France Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 1:23 AM
Rowena, your Monoku is so sadly beautiful, congratulations on your First Place win in the contest, well done, Constance ~
Velasco Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 5:03 AM
Thank you dear! Your words really touched me.
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