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Dawn cracks with magenta bold, painting a striated horizon's view
The couple's tale of love unfolds with promises like radiant sparkling dew

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2025

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Anne-Lise Andresen

October 20, 2025 at 4:46 PM

- A wonderful story they have to tell, Sara :) - Lovely poem :) - hugs

Eileen Manassian

October 18, 2025 at 1:14 AM

How romantic and sweet. Loved this piece. Blessings

Ravindra K Kapoor

October 17, 2025 at 3:29 AM

What an enchanting beauty you have spread on the poetry of your canvas that too in two short lines dear friend Sara. It goes as my favourite. With best wishes always.. Ravindra

Dr. Vandana Sharma

October 15, 2025 at 10:54 PM

Such a sweet promise of love..... All the best for the contest.

James Peranteau

October 15, 2025 at 5:16 AM

yuh cauze'd mine goose'z bumps dear poet....loved it! much love ')

John Loving Iii

October 13, 2025 at 5:24 PM

Been praying for the throte.

October 12, 2025 at 6:05 PM

lovely and moving images, thanks poet

sara Etgen-Baker

October 12, 2025 at 3:15 PM

poignant words about a couple's love tale...just exquisite, Sara K. hugs & blessings, Sara B

October 12, 2025 at 3:09 PM

Lovely imagery, Sara! The couple's tale of love is definitely something to go by in todays world. ~ Regards // paul

October 12, 2025 at 2:39 PM

Prettiness and poignant!

October 12, 2025 at 10:04 AM

Sara, This couplet is quite simply stunning. Sumptuous imagery a dream laden canvas for a haunting romantic tale. I really love this Howard

October 12, 2025 at 9:54 AM

How cute... ! It is always a pleasure seeing an old couple moving slowly along serving as props to each other.

Andrea Dietrich

October 11, 2025 at 10:08 PM

So lovely.

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