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sparrow molts
a plume follows
the breeze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 9:20 AM
Congratulations Kahlani on your great trophy win.
Steele Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 12:50 AM
I really appreciate that, Valsa. Thank you so much.
Poet Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 5:32 AM
Stunning imagery, Kahlani. Congratulations on your contest trophy win.
Steele Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 6:44 AM
Thank you so much, Sotto, for your kind words.
Dietrich Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 8:55 PM
Wow. So nice. Congratulations on trophy win
Steele Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 9:54 PM
Thank you for your lovely words, Andrea.
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