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longer daylight hours Mr. Sol warms the chill air white blanket recedes temperature quickly drops new white coat winters last gasp

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Date: 2/26/2025 5:13:00 AM
I’m feeling that last gasp, as yesterday I was looking at some flowers at a business, no bees buzzing yet, but the weather is slowly becoming “lighter” and most of us are ready!
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/26/2025 1:00:00 PM
I know how you feel. I am ready. Thanks Kim
Date: 2/26/2025 12:22:00 AM
This last gasp of winter is like a rising flame from a candle just before its final extinction. Spring is in the offing. Great tanka, dear friend.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/26/2025 2:28:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa. I appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 2/25/2025 2:51:00 PM
Hello Oliver, yes that is winter. HYou flrgot freezing rain, blizzards that comes sometimes. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/26/2025 10:41:00 AM
Hello Oliver, You are welcome my friend. /Darlene/
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/25/2025 5:40:00 PM
Thanks Darlene. I will. You as well. Best Oliver

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