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longer daylight hours Mr. Sol warms the chill air white blanket recedes temperature quickly drops new white coat winters last gasp
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Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 5:13 AM
I’m feeling that last gasp, as yesterday I was looking at some flowers at a business, no bees buzzing yet, but the weather is slowly becoming “lighter” and most of us are ready!
Mckeithan Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 1:00 PM
I know how you feel. I am ready. Thanks Kim
George Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 12:22 AM
This last gasp of winter is like a rising flame from a candle just before its final extinction. Spring is in the offing. Great tanka, dear friend.
Mckeithan Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 2:28 AM
Thank you very much Valsa. I appreciate your kind comments.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 2:51 PM
Hello Oliver, yes that is winter. HYou flrgot freezing rain, blizzards that comes sometimes. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 10:41 AM
Hello Oliver, You are welcome my friend. /Darlene/
Mckeithan Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 5:40 PM
Thanks Darlene. I will. You as well. Best Oliver
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