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there was a young surgeon named Bob who learned his craft on the job on a post op exam with stethoscope in hand realized where he left his Swiss watch and fob

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/21/2025 7:54:00 AM

Dear Oliver, This gave me a good laugh for it is sharp, clever, and perfectly timed. Poor Bob, but what a way to make a lasting impression! Loved it. Winter Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/21/2025 10:13:00 AM

Thanks Dan, glad you liked this limerick. He sure did make an impression. Best Oliver

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/20/2025 6:12:00 PM

Hey, hey, Oliver! You might want to post this one on Tik-Tok!!

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/20/2025 6:31:00 PM

Glad you like this one Gershon. Not much of a social media fan though

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/20/2025 1:00:00 PM

Very funny!

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/20/2025 1:24:00 PM

Thank you Kim

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/20/2025 12:25:00 PM

Bob the surgeon was all of a stew - He didn't have a clue what he should do - It was quite a shock - To hear the tick-tock - In tune with the patients heartbeat too.….. Beryl

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/20/2025 1:24:00 PM

LOL. Like this addition Beryl! Thanks

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/20/2025 12:24:00 PM

What a fun write. I want a different doctor. Thanks for the laugh. Have a fun day writing away......................

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/20/2025 1:23:00 PM

Thanks Paula. Yes time for a new Doc.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/20/2025 11:45:00 AM

ha! guess he ran out of time during that operation, oliver!

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/20/2025 11:58:00 AM

LOL Ilene. He must have. Hope it was still ticking so he could find it!. Thanks for reading