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contrails streak the sky
vaporous cotton left by
silver dots going
somewhere, my mind takes flight but
my feet are stuck to the ground
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 3:45 PM
Hello Oliver, Your feet are stuck on the ground because you are using your imagination to be where you are. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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January 31, 2025 at 9:43 AM
Hello Oliver, thank you my friend. /Darlene/
Mckeithan Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 5:39 PM
You as well my friend. Thanks for reading
Wolf Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 8:23 PM
Thanks for teaching me the word 'contrails,' Oliver. Love seeing them. Thanks, gw
Mckeithan Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 9:07 PM
Thank you Gershon.
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