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Taste rain that falls on your face Wish for it to be the answers But it still runs down then drops Every drop splashes on your feelings Thoughts on being caught up by them Beauty features and elegance that is silent Tissue soft roses that’s upon her face Twinkling eyes only seen in the night time Then after a blink and a spin, it is lost You reach your hand out for her pedal It slips out of the fingertips Call her name to wake the mountains She won’t care to answer Look around and see how the world laughs Then see your hands that are empty The heart still beats for one’s affection It has room for someone to give it a flow Feels hard to hold up your steady stand It seems too blind to see another her All that you can feel is the rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/16/2016 3:04:00 PM
LeRoy, Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/16/2008 12:19:00 PM
You did a wonderful job on this poem - It flowed well and was just beautifully written - God Bless
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Date: 9/13/2008 6:04:00 PM
Lovely poem. Nice use of imagery. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/13/2008 11:22:00 AM
awesome write, this poem really hit home with words and how you put your words. great poem.
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