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Taste rain that falls on your face
Wish for it to be the answers
But it still runs down then drops
Every drop splashes on your feelings
Thoughts on being caught up by them
Beauty features and elegance that is silent
Tissue soft roses that’s upon her face
Twinkling eyes only seen in the night time
Then after a blink and a spin, it is lost
You reach your hand out for her pedal
It slips out of the fingertips
Call her name to wake the mountains
She won’t care to answer
Look around and see how the world laughs
Then see your hands that are empty
The heart still beats for one’s affection
It has room for someone to give it a flow
Feels hard to hold up your steady stand
It seems too blind to see another her
All that you can feel is the rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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April 16, 2016 at 3:04 PM
LeRoy, Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
Jordan Avatar
September 16, 2008 at 12:19 PM
You did a wonderful job on this poem - It flowed well and was just beautifully written - God Bless
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September 13, 2008 at 6:04 PM
Lovely poem. Nice use of imagery. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Burton Avatar
September 13, 2008 at 11:22 AM
awesome write, this poem really hit home with words and how you put your words. great poem.
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