Untitled

A fire inside,
burns within.
Too many times I've cried,
I die yet again.
Hope is unknown,
sometimes waking is surreal.
Suicides are shown,
My pain wont heal!
I sing the sorrow,
Life isnt tangible.
I cant wake tomorrow,
I'm so full...
FULL OF PAIN!!!!
somebody help me through this nightmare,
somebody kill my fright.
Do you still you care,
If i cried would you hold me throughout the night?
Because i love you,
I cannot make it through...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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May 23, 2009 at 11:26 PM
Steven, congrats with this amazing feature this week...Raul
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May 23, 2009 at 5:42 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)
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May 23, 2009 at 4:02 PM
Congrats Steven on your "Untitled" rhyme being featured. Vince
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May 23, 2009 at 5:31 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured, James
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May 20, 2009 at 9:14 AM
I guess the fire is love… this piece is awesome.. I love the passion with which you write… you’ll make a great poet… keep writing! Great you! Congrats on a well deserved feature. Leke
Joseph Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 8:57 AM
coongratulations on your amazing poem being featured this week. How many of us have not felt these things as love leaves us?
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May 18, 2009 at 6:26 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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May 18, 2009 at 3:16 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Best wishes.
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May 18, 2009 at 12:07 AM
Congratulations my friend on your featured poem this week. Ernilando
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May 17, 2009 at 5:31 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. God helps us through the tough times. Blessings to you. Keep on writing. Karen
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