Untitled-Free Thoughts-Rap

Oh well here I go again, 
wishin for a dream that I could be wrapped in, 
entrapped in, 
torn away from addiction, 
destroy the tele… 
vision they strive to force upon you, 
its all false but you know I’m true. 
They will not protect you when you scream your broken cries, 
they are merely evil faces of masked men behind illuminati eyes 
with which they hypnotize, 
brainwash you with their lies. 
I've got those deep thoughts pouring in, 
all the roads I've traveled down
conditions I have traveled in 
here in my pretty town, 
the 910 deserves a crown. 
East Coast I'm representing, 
I promise you I am not venting. 
High on that purple haze, 
And still haven't slept for days, 
excuse these bloodshot eyes
with a krispy kreme glaze, 
some will try to say its just a silly phase...
My mind is so graphic, 
use words like special tactics, 
unmistakable like D'Jango, 
or a peace signs' angle, 
destroy the crave for war and struggle, 
no need to explain all the trouble, 
with places burstin’ into rubble, 
Rebel! Rebel! We’ll show ‘em hell! 
I’ll be fightin’ when I'm dead, 
kick and scream till my blood is shed, 
let authorities know the message will be spread! 
Put on a show with a little bit of passion 
or the bad things will continue to happen.
Get the love through your head, 
all this hatred should be dead, 
what I'm saying must be said, 
before the gauge goes into red. 
With vocabulary this brilliant makes a female more vigilant, 
like brothers boston what I speak 
my words alone will make you weak, make you faint, 
Like blood spilled by hands of a vigilante saint, 
trust me lifes too short,
you dont have the time my young cohort, 
wait until your words make an enemy
cause their threatened by the uncertainty 
that you will make it this far 
make a point unlike this war
next thing you know you see ‘em sweat
words fresh like paint drippin with purpose, 
makin ‘em wet.  
I finger paint a master piece with a just simple rhyme, 
just don't pull your piece on me just let me speak, my mind, 
while I unwind, rewind all this blasphemy, 
continential catastrophe, 
I may have to beg and plead so that my boys can rest in peace 
sorry for the interruption, 
don’t blame me for the corruption, 
for now I'll put my words at ease, 
hope you told someone you loved them today and that it wasn't a white lie, 
just a tease.

04.27.2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/11/2013 10:33:00 PM
Andrea.. Congratulations, in the MELTDOWN contest... take care-- always~ Linda
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Andrea Rose
Date: 7/11/2013 10:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, I have never exactly won anything before lol except maybe $2 on a lotto ticket but this, the recognition is so much more rewarding :) thanks again Linda!
Date: 7/9/2013 10:24:00 AM
Quite an outstanding poem very deep. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Andrea Rose
Date: 7/11/2013 1:24:00 AM
thank you so much!!
Date: 6/14/2013 3:10:00 PM
WICKED GONE SO IT SEEMS FREEDOM OF SPEECH THIS AGAIN SIMILER TO MY IF I COULD RAP POEM LOVE IT XXX DAVIDSCOTT
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Andrea Rose
Date: 6/14/2013 3:52:00 PM
Haha Thank you! :)
Date: 6/14/2013 2:19:00 PM
Reading this your words hit me like a bullet. I felt everything you were talking about. I've had some rough times and done some stupid things just to get me through it... this really hits home and thank you or speaking it so magically!
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Andrea Rose
Date: 6/14/2013 3:52:00 PM
Thanks girl I appreciate the love, especially from someone as talented as you!
Date: 6/14/2013 1:47:00 PM
Nice flow, broken symmetry...I think I wouldn't mind getting to limit thee...I mean rhyme a little, make a duet...possibly something that makes a beat sweat. I don't know...just being silly I guess. Nice beat and I digress.
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Andrea Rose
Date: 6/14/2013 3:50:00 PM
Haha very nice! Yes this piece is supposed to be a little off, glad you noticed the 'brokenness'
Date: 6/14/2013 11:04:00 AM
Value the moments, no promises of 'morrow. The flow in these lines are quite exquisite.
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Andrea Rose
Date: 6/14/2013 11:45:00 AM
Thank you SO much! :)
Date: 6/14/2013 9:19:00 AM
Powerful message! - Edward
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Andrea Rose
Date: 6/14/2013 9:31:00 AM
Good!! That is what I was aiming for. That as well as originality. People who I have read this to that I know love it. Thanks Edward :)
Date: 6/14/2013 6:49:00 AM
- A powerful poem that you have written very well Andrea ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Andrea Rose
Date: 6/14/2013 6:57:00 AM
Thank you so much this is one of my favorites! It's kind of like a rap lol. I had been up all night with so much on my mind I just started writing and this is what came out on paper.
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