Until You Return

It’s 4 am
I feign sleep
the room is quiet
it’s only your breathing that I hear
its rhythm is almost hypnotic
it feels safe

the night light of the city 
shimmers through the window
the blinds cast linear shadows
almost prison like bars
I count them one by one

I hear the faint rumble of a plane 
 in the distance  
and I know why I can’t sleep
you’ll be leaving in the morning

I look at the clock
it’s now 4:10
there’s no ticking
clocks don’t tick anymore
I wish they did

just a few minutes left before
some plane will whisk you away
 from me
and I’ll feign sleep each night
until you return
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 5:22 PM
aww such a tender love poem Mike I love the thought of feigning sleep just to listen to the comforting sound of her breathing:-) your romantic poems are so so touching:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentile Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Thank you so much, Jan. I am an old softy xxoo
Pandit Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 4:26 PM
You captured the restless feelings one has when parting from a loved one. The ending says it all..and I’ll feign sleep each night until you return. Well done, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thanks so much Vijay!!!
Sands Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Well written Mike. I can feel it too. Happy Saturday :)
Gentile Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thanks Heidi and a happy Saturday to you xxoo
Chakrabarty Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 12:35 PM
so delightful...delicate. Love.
Gentile Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Thank you so much, Rajat
Gauthier Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 10:37 AM
A beautiful poem, Mike. So delectably sweet. A FAVE with me.
Gentile Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Thank you so much Line, Happy Saturday xxoo
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