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Until We Meet

He walked away She smelled his sweet kiss on her all-day He recalls the mood they build together A rush of love so gentle like a feather Fluttering in the breeze all warm and glowing Two lovers threads gathered and sewing Quiver and blush with a childish ache Alive in the moment of a human trace Trance and defining the line of your face All kept in its cozy place Pluses reminiscent and rich of fire A steady light of love marked by desire Fragrant and weary eye and a state of reminisce What a thought the mind plays after such a kiss Hearts wanting and wanting so is the evening haunting Breathe gentle without hesitation loves cruel daunting This quiet place where the fire still burns Dreaming of tomorrows when he returns Eye to eye with a sheer passionate madness of delight Watching the skies capture the night

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Date: 8/1/2013 5:02:00 PM
subject: His kiss, Until we meet, Lonesome rider Laura : Such passion !, a hopeless romantic !, the angst of love so eloquently woven into the tapestry of ( I do believe ) your life’s journey and I only wish I had a fraction of your genius . Bill .
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Date: 7/27/2013 9:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Laura Mckenzie
Date: 7/28/2013 9:17:00 PM
Thank You !
Date: 7/27/2013 5:27:00 PM
Laura so moving love it congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles
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Laura Mckenzie
Date: 7/28/2013 9:17:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 7/27/2013 1:44:00 PM
Hi Laura, congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA
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Laura Mckenzie
Date: 7/28/2013 9:16:00 PM
it surprised me to thanks!
Date: 7/25/2013 5:22:00 PM
Very romantic dear lady
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Date: 7/25/2013 10:51:00 AM
"She smelled his sweet kiss on her all day"...funny thought: Were you walking around outside all day with your lips puckering up to your nose? =) This was a very charming piece!
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Date: 7/25/2013 10:14:00 AM
Lovely poem, enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl
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