UNTIL TIME IS DONE

For Timothy Lee
Eyes meet over sips of morning coffee; warmth travels thru both my body and heart while you couch-settle around and near me. I value sharing a perfect day’s start. I enjoy each fun, twosome adventure; hands clutched in the dark, entering a park where night skies speak no reproachful censor. We swing, slide, laugh – our own romantic lark. Home, a safe, private nest, our lives’ own stage, is my best, favorite, real life place. I relish all your couple, loving ways, and my own happy, mirrored on your face. Wrapping me secure within your warm skin each night before giving way to our sleep is a blessed delight with my spirit’s twin. I cherish the close embrace your arms keep. Pleasure is us, standing strong together, growing blessings, beliefs and faith as one, knowing we each make the other better and our love will be until time is done.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 6:54 PM
wonderful win for a wonderful poem, my dear friend. (if you don't see my emails yet, my dad passed away the next day after i talked on the phone with you. my sister Jenny will be driving me, thank goodness, to Washington on Tues)
Gondolf Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 11:05 AM
I enjoyed your touching love poem, CayCay, congrats on your win. John
Carber Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 9:43 AM
Congrats CAyCay on your win in Brian's contest!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 8:56 PM
Wow CayCay, this breathtaking poem should also be entered in the Valentine Contest! I am applauding your First Placement with vigor and joy! You deserve it CayCay. This exquisite romantic beauty is going into my Faves! Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
Scars Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 11:47 AM
CayCay, yet another beautiful poem dear lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest (sorry for the late comment) :)-luloo
Arowolo Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 9:25 PM
Wonderful piece,CayCay...Congrats on your superb win...And our love will be until time is done...Beautiful...
Mcconnell Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 1:47 PM
lovely loving piece CayCay, so well penned making it such a pleasurable read. blessings, Gordon
A   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 3:15 AM
CayCay, Congrats on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~
Cwiak Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 10:44 AM
He is a lucky fellow, CayCay. I only hope that he knows it. Congrats on this winner...and the one who is its inspiration.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 3:52 AM
What a pleasure to read Caycay.. congrats on big win!
Davies Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 6:29 PM
When 1+1=1 you know you have combined with your soulmate. Several lines in this poem proved the ultimate link between the two and appeared to be written from heartfelt experience, I hope this is the case, If not your inspiration for this poetry certainly comes from a truly understanding heart.
Pinet Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 9:06 AM
Love can not be granted, it must be experienced, and there are no easy answers or short cuts, but once achieved it stays within our hearts to be shared daily. Emile.
Gentry Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 1:46 AM
Congratulations!
A  Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 11:59 PM
CAYCAY, Congrats on your Simple Pleasure win. Hugs ** SKAT **
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 7:27 PM
Back to congratulate you on your nice win, CayCay! Hugs, Sandra
Merryman Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 3:16 PM
Finding and spending time with your true love is the best simple pleasure of all. Beautifully written, CayCay! Congrats on your 3rd place win and thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim
Scars Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 1:17 PM
CayCay, this is a wonderful write. You will do well in the contest, good luck and have a blessed day talented lady :) *smiles* -luloo
Makama Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Wisdom and arts hug as twins in between your lines. A wonderful 7
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 8:13 PM
You have found the love of your life and this sounds SO awesome to me. This is LIFE's TRUEST simple pleasure!!
Inman Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:09 AM
That is a beauty, CayCay, such sweet pleasure. Flows very well with smooth rhymes.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Simply beautiful! A true pleasure to read Cay Cay.
Trifiatis Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 5:26 AM
A melodic poem of the heart that sooths the soul, dear CayCay. A seven, good luck!
Garg Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 10:36 PM
Both of you are blessed. Stay blessed and enjoy these pleasures forever coz they are priceless....... A7
Haight Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Very beautiful, CayCay, and so well-written with your well-chosen words, excellent rhyme and rhythm. Love it, and it's a winner for me! Hugs, Sandra
Godwin Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 9:48 PM
Your uplifting comments mean the world to me. Thank you, Sandra, very much ... CayCay
Lindley Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 9:37 PM
This is beautiful, creative and an apt description of simple pleasures. The simplest is the joining with another.... Also the greatest as thats where love shines the greatest! A7
Godwin Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 9:47 PM
Thank you so much, Robert ... CayCay
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