Until Time Is Done

For Timothy Lee
Eyes meet over sips of morning coffee; warmth travels thru both my body and heart while you couch-settle around and near me. I value sharing a perfect day’s start. I enjoy each fun, twosome adventure; hands clutched in the dark, entering a park where night skies speak no reproachful censor. We swing, slide, laugh – our own romantic lark. Home, a safe, private nest, our lives’ own stage, is my best, favorite, real life place. I relish all your couple, loving ways, and my own happy, mirrored on your face. Wrapping me secure within your warm skin each night before giving way to our sleep, is a blessed delight with my spirit’s twin. I cherish the close embrace your arms keep. Pleasure is us, standing strong together, growing blessings, beliefs and faith as one, knowing we each make the other better and our love will be until time is done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/22/2019 6:54:00 PM
wonderful win for a wonderful poem, my dear friend. (if you don't see my emails yet, my dad passed away the next day after i talked on the phone with you. my sister Jenny will be driving me, thank goodness, to Washington on Tues)
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Date: 6/22/2019 11:05:00 AM
I enjoyed your touching love poem, CayCay, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 6/22/2019 9:43:00 AM
Congrats CAyCay on your win in Brian's contest!
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Date: 1/25/2019 8:56:00 PM
Wow CayCay, this breathtaking poem should also be entered in the Valentine Contest! I am applauding your First Placement with vigor and joy! You deserve it CayCay. This exquisite romantic beauty is going into my Faves! Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/28/2016 11:47:00 AM
CayCay, yet another beautiful poem dear lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest (sorry for the late comment) :)-luloo
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Date: 8/27/2016 9:25:00 PM
Wonderful piece,CayCay...Congrats on your superb win...And our love will be until time is done...Beautiful...
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Date: 2/4/2016 1:47:00 PM
lovely loving piece CayCay, so well penned making it such a pleasurable read. blessings, Gordon
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Date: 2/3/2016 3:15:00 AM
CayCay, Congrats on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/29/2016 10:44:00 AM
He is a lucky fellow, CayCay. I only hope that he knows it. Congrats on this winner...and the one who is its inspiration.
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Date: 1/28/2016 3:52:00 AM
What a pleasure to read Caycay.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 1/27/2016 6:29:00 PM
When 1+1=1 you know you have combined with your soulmate. Several lines in this poem proved the ultimate link between the two and appeared to be written from heartfelt experience, I hope this is the case, If not your inspiration for this poetry certainly comes from a truly understanding heart.
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Date: 1/27/2016 9:06:00 AM
Love can not be granted, it must be experienced, and there are no easy answers or short cuts, but once achieved it stays within our hearts to be shared daily. Emile.
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Date: 1/27/2016 1:46:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 1/26/2016 11:59:00 PM
CAYCAY, Congrats on your Simple Pleasure win. Hugs ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/26/2016 7:27:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your nice win, CayCay! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/26/2016 3:16:00 PM
Finding and spending time with your true love is the best simple pleasure of all. Beautifully written, CayCay! Congrats on your 3rd place win and thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/24/2016 1:17:00 PM
CayCay, this is a wonderful write. You will do well in the contest, good luck and have a blessed day talented lady :) *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/23/2016 12:09:00 PM
Wisdom and arts hug as twins in between your lines. A wonderful 7
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Date: 1/20/2016 8:13:00 PM
You have found the love of your life and this sounds SO awesome to me. This is LIFE's TRUEST simple pleasure!!
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Date: 1/19/2016 8:09:00 AM
That is a beauty, CayCay, such sweet pleasure. Flows very well with smooth rhymes.
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Date: 1/19/2016 8:06:00 AM
Simply beautiful! A true pleasure to read Cay Cay.
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Date: 1/19/2016 5:26:00 AM
A melodic poem of the heart that sooths the soul, dear CayCay. A seven, good luck!
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Date: 1/18/2016 10:36:00 PM
Both of you are blessed. Stay blessed and enjoy these pleasures forever coz they are priceless....... A7
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Date: 1/18/2016 9:45:00 PM
Very beautiful, CayCay, and so well-written with your well-chosen words, excellent rhyme and rhythm. Love it, and it's a winner for me! Hugs, Sandra
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/18/2016 9:48:00 PM
Your uplifting comments mean the world to me. Thank you, Sandra, very much ... CayCay
Date: 1/18/2016 9:37:00 PM
This is beautiful, creative and an apt description of simple pleasures. The simplest is the joining with another.... Also the greatest as thats where love shines the greatest! A7
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/18/2016 9:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robert ... CayCay
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