Until Morning No H E a D S

Vying buck running, rutting, Crying wolf crooning, yowling. Prowling puppy pouncing poking. Nipping nuzzling nibbling. Quirky bug buzzing by, Funny frog wooing, wowing, Witty owl winking, primping, Blitzing cockcrow crowing. Morning moon wincing winking, Twinkling-twirling tinting Pink puffy fog, coloring Glibly, gifting until morning – © January 4, 2011 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: H-E-A-D-S OR T-A-I-L-S! Sponsored by: nikko palmario

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Kash Poet

Date: 2/1/2012 2:47:00 AM

Congratulations Dane on your big win in Nikko's contest.I loved it first time around.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/31/2012 1:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win today in "Nikko's" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol

Greg Stanley

Date: 1/31/2012 11:28:00 AM

Very nice Dane Ann, congratulations on you wonderful win, Greg

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/31/2012 11:21:00 AM

Super duper congrats on your win here, Dane Ann! As I read this, I was just brought to this very beautiful and very Alive morning! I loved how you took me along from night time to that dawn, amazing imagery and very creative alliteration here, a real beauty! Fantastic job you did here!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/31/2012 10:44:00 AM

Good one like it congratulations Dane x

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/10/2012 7:58:00 AM

dane!.. love the kinetic action here, so dynamic and melodic.. oh, i struggled with mine too but i had fun.. i lke, like!.. best winning wishes... huggs to you.:)

Kash Poet

Date: 1/10/2012 3:01:00 AM

Revisiting this challenging write Dane.Love the perfect picture you have drawn here.Best wishes in crazy Nikko's contest.She will make all of us crazy...LOL.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/10/2012 5:09:00 AM

LOL! Maybe so, but we grow as poets! LOL Challenging is an understatement in my view! LOL

Kash Poet

Date: 1/4/2012 6:15:00 PM

Well done Dane.But I am seeing here 3 Ds.Please Check.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/4/2012 6:51:00 PM

Thanks, Kash. Would you mind doing a recheck, please! I can't believe how long this took and how many revisions. I posted just as I was taking my grandson to scouts. It was a challenge and a LOT of FUN...struggling, laughing, trying! LOL Thanks for commenting.

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/4/2012 4:51:00 PM

great job! whats up old friend?i like the way you did this. you probably see this everyday. i hear it's cold down there. we stole your weather tommarrow it will be 60 here. bye john

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/4/2012 6:53:00 PM

LOL 60! You stole it all right! And it is BELOW FREEZING here...AGAIN! lol