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Until Journey Ends

world's an element the whole spacious universe's laboratory watching's going on supreme master's creation egg of mass and souls purpose is time bound birth death continue in it until journey ends

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2016 12:10:00 PM

- Very well written, Bl - All three are great, my favorite is the final - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/26/2016 1:20:00 PM

Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your beautiful comment and enlisting this poem as your favorite. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/25/2016 7:17:00 AM

Stunning philosophical Haikus that will take some time for the mind to analyze my good friend, CPBL! A7 for each!

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/25/2016 10:43:00 AM

Thanks my genius friend for your high appreciation and for 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/24/2016 2:45:00 PM

A poetic jewel whose brilliance and clarity deeply touches this reader :-) Thank you :-) blessings, lynn

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/25/2016 10:45:00 AM

Thanks my friend for your high appreciation and for 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl