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Until Journey Ends

world's an element
                                     the whole spacious universe's 
                                                 laboratory 

                                           watching's going on
                                      supreme master's creation
                                         egg of mass and souls 

                                         purpose is time bound
                                        birth death continue in it 
                                            until journey ends

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2016 12:10:00 PM

- Very well written, Bl - All three are great, my favorite is the final - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/26/2016 1:20:00 PM

Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your beautiful comment and enlisting this poem as your favorite. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/25/2016 7:17:00 AM

Stunning philosophical Haikus that will take some time for the mind to analyze my good friend, CPBL! A7 for each!

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/25/2016 10:43:00 AM

Thanks my genius friend for your high appreciation and for 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/24/2016 2:45:00 PM

A poetic jewel whose brilliance and clarity deeply touches this reader :-) Thank you :-) blessings, lynn

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/25/2016 10:45:00 AM

Thanks my friend for your high appreciation and for 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl