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Until I Go Blind

A limerick needn't end with just one verse A whole new pattern could very well emerge A story in fact Four verses to be exact It opens up a whole new poetic universe So as of this day, I'm on this new kick Don't want to wind up with limericks too slick Just add a new twist With a flick of the wrist With more than one verse my mind goes adrift A chance to expand to new ideas up ahead Create whole stories where I once feared to tread Little vignettes As creative as it gets Not bound by limitations but freedom instead Who would have thunk it after all this time A new and exciting format to challenge my mind Exploring new vistas Maybe get into mischief Gonna write, write, write, until I go blind

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Date: 12/26/2021 3:07:00 PM
Hello Happy Jack, Write until your pens runs dry. Love, Darlene xxxxoooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/27/2021 11:56:00 AM
Hello Happy Jack, Thank you. Love, Darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/26/2021 6:30:00 PM
Great advice Darlene! Love, Happy Jack XOX
Date: 12/26/2021 1:13:00 PM
Outstanding!! Jack
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/26/2021 1:24:00 PM
Well thank you dear Debra L.!!! Much appreciated! Love, Happy Jack XOX
Date: 12/26/2021 10:52:00 AM
That is just an old wife's tale; keep at it! Aloha!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/26/2021 11:35:00 AM
Aloha Rico!!! This is thank you times 2! MUCH APPRECIATED my friend!
Date: 12/26/2021 9:45:00 AM
Wonderful! I hope you write, write, write, and NEVER go blind, Jack. Enjoy!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/26/2021 10:04:00 AM
Just a metaphor my friend! LOL HOPE I don't go blind... Merry Boxing Day!

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