Until Death

Your hair so black
Your skin so pale
This contrast of things 
Make my heart sail

When ever i see you
My heart skips a beat
Time appears to slow
My mind even fails

Skin like a dolls
So soft and tender
Makes my heart surrender
and my eyes how they wail

My love is endless
our spirits are free
Untill my own body's
Stiff as a nail
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Allen Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 4:42 PM
Terrific imagery-- ~Skyy
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January 11, 2010 at 1:35 PM
Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week >> James
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January 11, 2010 at 10:43 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura :0)
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January 11, 2010 at 4:33 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Cameron. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 1:22 AM
Cameron, Beautiful example of IambicPentameter. Congratulations on this feature of the week and thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Love, Lainie
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January 10, 2010 at 2:19 PM
Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Best wishes with your writing. Enjoy your honor. Karen
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January 10, 2010 at 12:17 PM
Cameron - many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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