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Until

How quick good news travels..
tho' never was in the wind.  
And someday just sat aside,
watching, waiting.

Yet in the strong of heart
the cold of never could 
never grow within. 

Yesterday was just here, waving
but just as sudden..
disappeared. 

If time could promise no delay, no moans of pain,
or wind drifted banks in sorrow.  
Then 'Will you be' can run- 
and 'can you stay' can play 
for all of our
tomorrows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 8/10/2025 4:17:00 AM
It feels like a quiet moment of waiting and hoping, with nice images like good news traveling and time waving goodbye. The ending gives a sweet, hopeful feeling. Nice work!
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Date: 7/2/2025 5:15:00 AM
Will you stay... Let's hope she accepts your plaintive please Richard. Have.a great week
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