Untie the Knot
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I decided to make a haibun using my comment on my previous poem, "While Brushing My Teeth." My muse likes to recycle.
When I was very young, I learned how to tie my shoes in a tight double knot, but I couldn't untie them. I tried and tried but to no avail. I was stubborn and didn't want to ask for help, but eventually, I had to ask Mom or Dad to help me. And they did. It makes you wonder, who will untie the hard knots that humanity's responsible for?
who will rescue us
creation or creator ...
what of our children?
2/26/2023
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Copyright © Mark Toney | Year Posted 2023
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