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Caught in emotion She went down to the ocean To where the cliffs are extremely steep And there she wept Then finally lept At a place called 'Lover's Leap' But while doing here pouting The tide took to outing And now the tour guides to show Where lost love and gravity Made a large cavity Far far on the beach below

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Date: 5/20/2020 2:00:00 PM
There are several places that are named Lover’s Leap. I visited the one atop Lookout Mountain in Chattanooga Tennessee. We were told there were many who had leaped to their death together there, and alone. I enjoyed your poem very much Whit. A warm welcome to Poetry Soup. I found this first post of yours by seeing your other poem being Featured on the home page. Congrats on that one too. Aloha Connie
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Whit Deschner
Date: 5/20/2020 5:56:00 PM
Thank you Connie for your comment. Perhaps it's time to start a tour of lover's leaps. Perhaps we could combine it with bungee jumping. Whit
Date: 12/5/2019 5:20:00 AM
This is hilarious!
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Date: 9/19/2019 7:36:00 PM
haha... I loved it... Ann
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Date: 9/18/2019 6:06:00 PM
Awesome
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Date: 9/18/2019 12:50:00 PM
Bravo Whit! Thanks for the chuckle this morning. I enjoyed this fun poem.
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Date: 3/8/2019 6:24:00 AM
Nice rhyming scheme dear poet.
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