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Caught in emotion
She went down to the ocean
To where the cliffs are extremely steep
And there she wept
Then finally lept
At a place called 'Lover's Leap'

But while doing here pouting
The tide took to outing
And now the tour guides to show
Where lost love and gravity
Made a large cavity
Far far on the beach below

12th gradeabsencefunnyheartbrokenlight verse

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Connie Marcum Wong

May 20, 2020 at 2:00 PM

There are several places that are named Lover’s Leap. I visited the one atop Lookout Mountain in Chattanooga Tennessee. We were told there were many who had leaped to their death together there, and alone. I enjoyed your poem very much Whit. A warm welcome to Poetry Soup. I found this first post of yours by seeing your other poem being Featured on the home page. Congrats on that one too. Aloha Connie

Whit Deschner

May 20, 2020 at 5:56 PM

Thank you Connie for your comment. Perhaps it's time to start a tour of lover's leaps. Perhaps we could combine it with bungee jumping. Whit