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When everything in your world is beautifully colored you float on a cloud of bliss limbs float untethered shine like wings, you dance swirling, swaying, swishing hips spread your wings fly, arms folded to embrace breathe deeply store joy for rainy days the light offered by life and the shroud of darkness offered by night singing up to the rainbow sky eyes twinkling with a weekend getaway. 2nd Place contest winner Written: October 21, 2022 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 10/25/2022 12:05:00 PM
Great verse, the feel and description well written. Congratulations on your win, Lasaad. Blessings friend
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Date: 10/25/2022 3:32:00 AM
When life appears colorful we will soar on wings of delight ! A poem sparkling with positivity and beauty. Congratulations dear Lasaad for your great win....
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Date: 10/24/2022 10:53:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your bliss through this muse of yours. God bless you.
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Date: 10/24/2022 2:12:00 AM
- Las, thank you for this beautiful bliss - Congratulations on a well-deserved 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/21/2022 3:47:00 PM
Love this refreshing Poem Lasaad. Such an inspiration of joy in reading. Love this one and it is a favorite. I love your theme. A more earthly tone simple but great in appreciation. This is one of my favorites from you. It really reflects your heart in sharing and I really loved reading it. Read it several times it evoked such nice feelings in me... Almost addicting to read my friend...
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Date: 10/21/2022 3:37:00 PM
Your opening stanza spells the essence. Enjoyed the spirit of your poem my friend.
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Date: 10/21/2022 12:25:00 PM
Beautiful concept of bliss. So much emotion. Best for a win.
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