Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Senryu

Unsung Poem

Unsung poem





Orange of twilight
fades into darkness of night
my poem misjudged...

Heart cries in despair
no readers and no comments
emotions unheard...

A brilliant sunrise
hold my pen as sparrows chirp
words silently flow.....





Written July 5th, 2015
For contest by Marvin celestial

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Ralph Sergi July 28, 2015 at 7:27 AM Beautiful poem, Dr. Upma: Congratulations on your win.

Mary Rotman July 27, 2015 at 8:44 AM I love this poem. Such a delicate touch to show an emotion many of us feel! Congratulations!

Skat A July 24, 2015 at 4:51 PM Dr Upma, congratulations, awesome senryu. SKAT LOVE

Olusegun Arowolo July 24, 2015 at 3:50 PM Interesting and wonderful piece,dear friend.. Congrats on your superb win in this contest.....

Suzanne Delaney July 24, 2015 at 3:31 PM Yes in the end we write for ourselves. Love this wise message. Congrats on your win. SuZ

Eve Roper July 24, 2015 at 11:33 AM Congratulations on your win a seven. Hugs Eve

Marvin G. Celestial July 24, 2015 at 10:15 AM Congratz!

Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 8:28 AM wonderful imagery Dr Sharma - may your wise words always flow:-) hugs Jan xx

Julia Ward July 7, 2015 at 6:02 AM A pretty poem, with an outstanding third senryu. A 7. Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 7, 2015 at 8:56 PM Thnx julia

Ralph Sergi July 6, 2015 at 12:46 PM Your imagery is great, Dr. Upma! I can imagine you sitting by a table or desk pondering your prose. Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 6, 2015 at 11:27 PM Thnx Ralph!

Kp Nunez July 6, 2015 at 7:14 AM Sensitive and honest to one's feelings, you have written something to which most of us can relate to. Whatever happens after we have finished with the write, there is a satisfaction that we write from the heart, Dr. Upma. Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 6, 2015 at 11:27 PM Thnx Kim!

Andrea Dietrich July 5, 2015 at 11:35 PM wow, this is REALLY good stuff. I hope you get LOTS of reads AND comments, dear. You did excellent work here. Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 6, 2015 at 11:27 PM Thnx Andrea for ur sweet words always!

Constance La France July 5, 2015 at 10:47 PM Upma, so beautifully penned, such a sadness within the silent words, wonderful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, I love you . . . Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 5, 2015 at 11:16 PM Thnx BW for ur super 7 and kind visit!

Tim Smith July 5, 2015 at 2:23 PM This sometimes happens...remember who you are writing for...you... Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 5, 2015 at 11:16 PM Yes true Tim! Appreciate ur kind visit!

Eileen Manassian July 5, 2015 at 8:41 AM :) Lovely, My Dear Dr Upma....Yes...let those words keep flowing. Hugs to you!!! :) Good luck in the contest, dear. Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 5, 2015 at 11:15 PM Thnx dear Eileen! Love ur visits!