Unsundering-Silence of the Sorcerous

O gilded tongue, I dare not speak, your eyes my ruin flash
Seek not the curse, doth silence scream, beg mercy, your agash





Agash is a game played by the Pashtuns in Pakistan
Unsundering is a magical battle fought in the 24th
century by followers of this belief. (thanks Charles!)

08/12/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/26/2013 8:33:00 AM
Very cool and droll; you have a most unique style and perspective :)
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Date: 10/20/2012 1:59:00 PM
Hello James...thanks for sharing this unusual piece.
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Date: 9/20/2012 2:09:00 PM
Wow..I want to know more do me a blog tell me about it! Light & Love
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Date: 9/5/2012 8:29:00 PM
interesting write...thanks for the encouragement....I hope to be all right one day...
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Date: 8/29/2012 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Jimbo. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2012 3:46:00 PM
Interesting and educational work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/26/2012 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win James
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Date: 8/25/2012 8:48:00 PM
JAMES;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD
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Date: 8/25/2012 8:00:00 PM
An interesting write, James. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/25/2012 6:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Lee
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Date: 8/25/2012 1:03:00 PM
I appreciate the note at the bottom and I really like this one. congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/18/2012 11:13:00 PM
Jimbo- -you made me look up the word agash, which was good- -only I couldn't find it , which was bad. Now you owe me. I'm waiting on the definition - Chas Otherwise this sure reads nice.
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Date: 8/12/2012 12:41:00 PM
whoa there Jimbo, I entered this contest, how on earth am I supposed to beat this, I like it a lot, I don't think you need luck...David
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