Arlene Smith Poet Tanka

Unstoppable

nature's love potion;
pure animal attraction
overtaking us,
builds, then begs for sweet release
one can't stop the falling rain



03/03/15
Contest: Get Romantic
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
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Casarah Nance March 11, 2015 at 5:43 PM Oh I love this one too! This was perfect for the prompt! Well done!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 9, 2015 at 10:06 PM A beautiful, romantic picture, Arlene...congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Skat A March 8, 2015 at 6:21 PM ARLENE, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A March 8, 2015 at 11:58 AM Arlene, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 2:56 PM Dropping back with my congrats Arlene:-) Hugs Jan xx

Robert Johnson March 7, 2015 at 1:05 PM We can't stop it, but we can sadly stay inside and not get wet.

Monterey Sirak March 7, 2015 at 8:21 AM Fantastic! The last line is absolutely true.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty March 7, 2015 at 6:07 AM It is a great write Arlene...one can't stop the falling rain. Congrats on win.Love

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2015 at 11:54 PM Nicely done. Congrats in my contest, Arlene.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 5, 2015 at 4:10 AM you painted a delightful picture.. :)!

Jan Allison March 3, 2015 at 11:00 AM You created such a vivid image Arlene - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx